Ouch

[theoriginalblurker]

Imitrex tastes bad
Migraine headache won't go 'way
This should be a haiku

But it's not.

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[la-directora.livejournal.com]

I interpreted her word choices as being symbollic of the fractured way one sees the world when one has a migraine. Including the extra syllable in the last line, and the choice to make it not a true limeric. But maybe that's just me.

Hey, Green Eyes, feel better fast! Migraines suck, I know.

[greeneyes-rpi.livejournal.com]

That was almost exactly what happened. :)

I wrote:

Migraine headache won't go away
Imitrex tastes bad
This should be a haiku

Then I switched the first two lines, removed one syllable, purposely left in the "a" in the last line, and added, "but it's not," 'cause it's not.

la_directora wins!